Nowadays society is focused on something that I've decided
to call "stereotypes' war". Not only do we have to have the thinnest
figure, the most perfect smile and the most successful job, we also have to
know about fashion, popular sports and it's important to have the last
technology. On the other hand it's the social life. People of today should have
friends of a specific thinking way and very rarely do we socialize with other
people. We are becoming robots serial facts.
This situation is getting out of hand. Under no
circumstances should we forget where is the stop. Above all we are humans and
we have to enjoy life, in my case I've not finished my exams when I start
thinking about the next semester projects and this mixed with my healthy plan
of food and gym, of course I'm not apart on the "stereotypes' war".
Despite of this I have an advice for you, It's easy to follow
and It takes a few time from the week routine. First of all you have to propose
to take a day for you, we'll call it 'my own special day'. Well, during all 'my
own special day' you only have to dress yourself like you want, eat whatever
you want (reading the ingredients of the food is not the right way) and after
this you change the gym evening by a long walk around a village, a park or
wherever open air place. Having done this once every one or two weeks you'll
feel better with yourself. I wish this would be useful to you and good luck fighting
against the 'stereotypes' war'.
The tone and general style of writing here is exactly right. You have also used inversions to good effect. Well done.
ResponderEliminarSome specific usages are hard to understand though:
stereotypes' war; robots serial facts; of course I'm not apart on the "stereotypes' war"; specific thinking way
Also, collocations: what collocates with 'change'?
Check wish/hope